Wednesday, October 04, 2006

Beautiful Nightmare/revised

jealousy comes in many colors
wearing masks full of promise
and smiles from lips that lie

I've seen it, felt it,
loved it, bled from it
find comfort in it

my beautiful nightmare
a tragic truth
so undeniably me


*Thanks, E! I just needed a kick in the arse. It's amazing what what three small words can do, eh?

4 comments:

Erin said...

Much smoother! Me likey! *hug*

Sir James Eric Watkins said...

Yeah!

You already know what I think about this piece. excellent!

~ James

Sir James Eric Watkins said...

Now, I'm undecided. damn. I think I must consider the fact that I saw the other version first. So, to have an opinion that you can build a house on, I'll have put on a "veil of ignorance" on and examine this matter further.

westcoastmama said...

:-) contemplate away, my dear. That's what you're good at.